The last breath
of days upon us,
Seeds of memories
against our will,
Heads pressed
upon our pillow sleep,
A master of inner cranium design,
Thoughts of
fantastic creature and places
Love and wonder sparkling
like morning dew.
Upon the night
sight bring others dew,
Disguised in
darkness creeping near us,
Fights off
thoughts of devils design,
Lightly feathered
wings of sleep,
Time awakens
weakens will,
Breathing is
peaceful in these quiet places.
Stream of
crystals and garden places,
Mountains rugged,
purple-gray misty dew,
Vivid images of knights and castles ravage us,
Imps, witches,
savages, of our own design,
Time is mute and
space still sleep,
Rambling,
fighting, clenched fights of will.
Knights in
passing fists of will,
Keeps the demons
in their places,
Breasts of silver, blood-like dew,
Swords held high
the fight is in us,
Slicing, dicing
forceful design,
Riding on unicorn
dust, wings of sleep.
Breaking in our
minds deep sleep,
Victory
triumphant voices will,
Peaceful laughing, smiling with us,
Eyes shine bright
within sleeps murky dew,
Demons slayed,
return safe protected places,
Patterns in our
heads design.
Time for new
ideas design,
Unconscious
natural state of REM sleep,
Taking on future
exciting dangers with enormous will,
The right occasion
for such wondrous places,
Small droplets of
water dreams of dew,
A vague clarity
streaming from us,
All within us
achieving a grand design,
Peaceful resurrections
will play a cast of valored sleep,
Night’s
auspicious places still reminiscent of morning’s dew.
I'm surprised we aren't exausted if all this goes on inside our heads while we sleep. In terms of lines, I'm a big fan of how dream descriptions get more intense (i.e. from "lightly feathered wings" to knights and swords and such. On a personal note, you seem more removed from this one. Are you less a fan of forms? Are they too constricting for your taste?
ReplyDeleteI had little time to write this poem, not much contemplation, only an hour and fifteen. I have little time to do anything it seems. But I actually enjoyed writing it, it was a bit hard, thats why I may have seemed a bit removed.
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